Beat Chamber
Character Lab
Cast
P
Your Protagonist
Lead
A
Antagonist
Opposing force
M
Mentor / Mirror
Support
Rank Hall
Overall Craft Score
82/100
Strong — refinement ahead
Structure85
First Light is strong. The Strike lands on page 11. Watch Act Two — The Hunt is thin so far.
Dialogue78
Protagonist voice is clear. Two supporting characters need differentiation — they sound similar in current scenes.
Character88
Strong internal contradictions. The wound is implicit, not stated — that's working. Consider raising the external want's stakes.
Pacing76
Pages 1–4 are slow. First Light works but action stalls before The Strike. Tighten by 1–2 pages.
Theme81
Theme threads through effectively. Watch for a moment where a minor character states it — then have the protagonist reject it.
Marketability84
High-concept hook is clear. Genre conventions honored without being predictable. Strong logline potential.
TV Engine79
Pilot and episode modes evaluate act-outs, A/B/C story balance, season propulsion, and whether the core conflict can sustain future episodes.
Export Gate
PDF
Industry-standard Courier 12pt. Proper margins, scene numbering. Submission-ready.
FDX
Industry screenplay exchange format for compatible professional screenwriting tools.
Fountain
Open screenwriting format. Plain text, version-control friendly, universal compatibility.
DOCX
Microsoft Word with formatting preserved. For notes, table reads, and collaborators.
Also available
📋 Coverage Report
📊 Beat Sheet PDF
🗂 Character Bible
📑 Scene Breakdown
🎬 One-Page Sides